6.30.2012

A Summer Poem (RJD #14)

Beach gazing: Nantucket, Ma

 My RJD offering for you today friends, will be a Summer Treat. 
I often write poems in my journals then forget about them. 
Poetry is just a way I express myself, I suppose. 
It kind of just comes, so I submit myself to the pen and let it flow. 
I forgot all about this little ditty I jotted down in the early days.
1997 was the year that God really began speaking to me, 
or perhaps when I finally was willing to obey.
 Or at least try. For better or worse.
I felt like I could hear Him all the time, everywhere. 
I stole away with Him often. 
It was the Honeymoon time of my faith...

This is pretty raw. Unedited.
As you can see!
Enjoy!

I Have Felt His Presence

Here
and faraway
Near 
and every day...
[present, now, especially today]
O magnificent Ocean
You are but a drop of water
held within His hand
[Behold His glory]
Every sparkling glimmer dancing upon the sand
[Look closely]
I have seen His glorious work!
But where sand meets sea
is where He anointed me...
Rendezvous
Splendid and beautiful place
He has chosen His merciful grace
as a gift imparted to me...
My Lord blesses me
here by the sea
Alone~
I seek His grace and loving-kindness
Behold
He kisses me with Sun and warmth
Caresses me with a gentle breeze
He embraces me with His loving light
Heals me with salty air
and cleanses me with 
His foamy, 
green waters and righteousness
of whom shall I compare?
None I dare.
Praise Be To God
I see His glory in every hue of blue 
of the sky
and wonder why
He would choose me
from the land
as part of His unfolding plan. 


July 24, 1997- October 8, 1997


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6 comments:

  1. So beautiful. Over the years, by the ocean is where I've most often felt the Lord's presence. I love the pic that goes with it, and the ocean wave sounds in the background....well, all I need right now is to put my feet in the sand, and I'm right there with ya -- and with Him!

    Grateful for your posts, always, and for your friendship.

    Blessings,
    Pam

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  2. i can feel the sweetness of your early love
    in this....the excitement that the God of the
    universe wants together time with me.
    it stirs that early romantic feeling
    again
    and makes me hungry for alone time
    with Him again.
    thank you for sharing your beautiful poetry,
    Jennifer

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  3. oh I love your poem! like a psalm!

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  4. Like an oasis is your poem for me today. Like the rush of water over the sands of people and food and caregiving and life swallowing me. Thank you for this moment of sweetness. Refreshing. Needed. Yes, thank you.

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  5. I like the picture of you watching the ocean. And waht you said that the ocean - that is so huge you can't see the other side - is but a frop of water. That blew my mind. Thanks again for all the prayers. sandie

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  6. Beautiful, Dawn! You have a beach day poem gift from the sea, too. I loved the way you constructed this - and know what you mean about how you just write and out it flows. Awesome!!
    Joy!
    Kathy

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walk along the shore with me and leave your footprints in the sand-
I'm listening, friend...in November I will not be replying so often, but instead slip quietly over to your place for a visit. ;)